Opinion paragraph

In, my opinion i think that Notre Dame High School and the city of Ottawa can do fundraising then give that money can go to the children's hospital that can help immigrants families and ESL students programs. Students also health care, free education, free house's and stuff like that. But they can give them money to pay bills, insurance also buy groceries to eat at home. That money they can reserve for future retirment that would be good. Notre Dame Hish School does really good things for ESL students..they need to continue.